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My hobbie is riding on motorbikes I've been riding motorbike's ever since I was 3. sometimes I would be able to go for a ride on the fields or up to the school it will be fun if i went to my mate's. Me and my dad will go riding out at Tokerau beach sometimes he would take me out west he would also take me for a feed and that is why I love to ride motorbikes.
hey Kauri its Billyray have you ramp to ramp bye.
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ReplyDeleteHi Kauri it is Ari. I like how describe what you enjoy doing with your motorcycles, however you could improve on your punctuation. What is your favorite thing to do on the motorbike?
ReplyDeleteHey Ari My favourite thing to do on motorbikes are wheelie's Whats your favourite car.
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