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Friday 27 July 2018

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Hook in = What happens to 1080. 1080 drops on the land and kills the native birds and animals.
R- I think they should not drop 1080 because it is killing native birds and animals.
E- When they drop 1080 it disintegrates the grounds and poisons the grass. Also killing animals
living on the ground like kiwis and kea. Kea is eating 1080 because they think its food.

 E- 1080 is dropping over 100 - 1000 forests and killing native birds, soon we will have no kiwi.

F- I think it's sad because it is killing kiwi and baby eggs.    
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24 comments:

  1. Anonymous31 July 2018 at 10:15

    that was really good kauri maybe make the writing fit next time but great writing

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:19

      thank you Kiesha for the facts that i have to work on next time.

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  2. Anonymous31 July 2018 at 10:21

    I love way you started your writing but please fix your paragraph because I cant see it all come look at my blog so you have an example https://kaipcruzr.blogspot.com/

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:20

      hi Cruz Thank you for the facts to make it smaller bye.

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  3. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 11:53

    you should perveiw it

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:21

      haha thanks spencer i will preview it bye.

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  4. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 11:53

    good writing but make it fit next time

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:22

      hi Devlin thank you for the facts i work on editing it bye.

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  5. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 11:53

    excellent kauar next time just put a bit more putcherasin

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:25

      thanks Kade for the information i just got one thing for you just need to work on your spelling bye.

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  6. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 11:57

    Hi. That is amazing. More punctuation.

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:26

      hi Ella thanks for the information i will try to put more punctuation bye.

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  7. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 12:05

    HI
    That is really good.
    My feedback is that you could add More punctuation.
    thx

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 09:28

      hi Lara thx i will put some punctuation bye.

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  8. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 12:22

    that is amzing i love it

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    1. Anonymous9 November 2018 at 11:09

      thanks nela for saying that my work was amazing bye.

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  9. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 12:37

    Hi Cody nice work but maybe next time Check on it before you publish it like preview your words go over the side

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    1. Anonymous14 November 2018 at 08:39

      thank you maia i will fix the mistakes bye.

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  10. Anonymous3 August 2018 at 12:40

    Good work but preview it be for you publish it.

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    1. Anonymous14 November 2018 at 08:41

      thanks kaylee i will preview it bye now.

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  11. Anonymous17 August 2018 at 09:14

    Hi Kauri. I like your vocab and description on 1080.
    Just don't forget to preview before you publish.
    You just have to format it.

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    1. Anonymous14 November 2018 at 08:42

      thanks charlie i will preview it bye.

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  12. Anonymous17 August 2018 at 09:26

    Hi Kauri its me Corey I like your writing just a little help you could make the line shorter. Thanks

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    1. Anonymous14 November 2018 at 08:43

      hi corey next time i will make the lines shoter bye

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