I am a Year 8 student at Kaingaroa School in Northland, NZ. I am in Huia Whānau and my teacher is Miss Fleet.
Hey Kauri I like the actual story but the intro needs some work because it doesn't make sense.but over all I really like it.
Hey Kauri. I love the layout of your slide. The background is really bright. I like it. Maybe more level 3 words
Hi Kauri cool writing I love how you remade the story in your own words.
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Hey Kauri I like the actual story but the intro needs some work because it doesn't make sense.but over all I really like it.
ReplyDeleteHey Kauri. I love the layout of your slide. The background is really bright. I like it. Maybe more level 3 words
ReplyDeleteHi Kauri cool writing I love how you remade the story in your own words.
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